Wednesday, 28 April 2010

front cover feedback

i have shown my first draft of my front cover to a focus group and this is the feedback that they have given me to help me improve it;


  • consistant colour
  • needs to be more striking
  • writing is too small
  • text is too boxy
  • some people dont like the red font
  • picture at the bottom....what is it linked to??
  • good pictures
  • good main story
  • good name

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